Guardian Camera Club: pasha9's portfolio review

Untitled: Good spot. Nice candid portrait of an extraordinary face in a crowd Photograph: pasha9/flickr

Untitled: This picture almost works, with it's strong use of colour - green and a splash of red - but it's a bit too messy. Perhaps shooting slightly tighter so that background was all green would have been better Photograph: pasha9/flickr

Untitled: Good strong doggie portrait! It's slightly flat - shot in poor light, the picture needs a bit more contrast Photograph: pasha9/flickr

Untitled: Another wide scene which has some charm, but again suffers from slightly loose framing - the old chap seems to have boat coming from the back of his head and there's an annoying red bouy on the left Photograph: pasha9/flickr

Untitled: This is much better. An intimate portrait with really nice colour tones, the blue hues in the cloth are also present in the skin tones from the soft daylight Photograph: pasha9/flickr

Untitled: A detail of a train carriage. Good, bright colour with strange rubber doughnut. I guess you have to like trains, though Photograph: pasha9/flickr