Guardian Camera Club: jeromelorieau's portfolio review

Edinburgh: Good use of strong shadows and lines with the little figure giving a sense of scale. Atmospheric Photograph: jeromelorieau's /Flickr

Gran Poder, La Paz, Bolivia: It would have been better to concentrate on getting one of the dancers fully in frame as the one on the left is slightly cropped off leaving you wondering where the focus of the picture is. Nice colour and contrast Photograph: jeromelorieau/Flickr

Hoi An, Vietnam: The composition of this picture is good, it could have been improved by bumping up the contrast of the greens. It would also have been nice shot from above so the circle of her hat mirrored those of the bowls Photograph: jeromelorieau's buddy icon /Flickr

Fast foods in the Medina of Fes: When I came in it I didn't realise how smoky was the restaurant. I left the place with a nice perfume of barbecue. Lovely. A nice atmospheric picture, gives a sense of being inside the food quarter Photograph: jeromelorieau/Flickr

Second hand book sellers reading along the Seine River bank, Paris: Almost successful, the photographer is trying to use the face from the advert against the bookseller's face but the background and composition don't quite work and are a distraction. It would be nice to see more books Photograph: Jeromelorieau/Flickr

Passer by and mototaxi in Trujillo: This picture would be better without the man as the strong lines and negative space are are interrupted by the unremarkable figure. It is nicely composed with good strong colours Photograph: jeromelorieau/Flickr